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-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-1-29(#7244680@0)
nice story
-fly_universe(飞越时空);
2012-1-29(#7244705@0)
interesting biography, maybe more of a story. look forward to No. (3).
-c__wang(溪);
2012-1-29(#7244717@0)
I am glad that you enjoy it. I haven’t decided what and how to write in (3), but I will leave it up to the next Sunday morning.
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-1-30(#7246286@0)
fixate right time to rest and you will find more productivity and efficiency out of yourself. Thank you for bringing up the 'refined' english. i am so much soaked in everyday/practical english now and forgot the entertainment of it.
-c__wang(溪);
2012-1-30(#7246330@0)
Thank you! I should have proofread it before I posted it. I am getting sloppy this time. I thought about it but laziness overtook me in the end. I will improve it in my next story.Correction:
seating == > being seated
Two Bar ==> Two Bars
across == > came across
Judgemental day ==> Judgement Day
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-1-30{122}(#7246290@0)
Truly wish it's just about a story,sigh......especially for the girl who fade away for nothing, who the hell has the right to treat her that way!!!no excuse could ever
Be there to treat a human being that way,even if u r her parents!!!
-oiseau(月舞飞天);
2012-1-29(#7244736@0)
side question - if you were there seeing the girl being treated so, what would you do at the moment? serious question, not to tease
-c__wang(溪);
2012-1-29(#7244742@0)
I don't know if you ever heard of a name Delilah. There was a story I listened just within the last 2D. A mom, after the Dad moved on, leaving two kids at home, partied outside. It was a neighbor asking Delilah for advicehttp://www.delilah.com/pages/stations.html.
Delilah said -
If you really love the kids, report to law enforcement immediately so they can be cared.
This is from me
If I was a kid, I would not have done any better than you mentioned and/or proposed.
-c__wang(溪);
2012-1-29{260}(#7245262@0)
Your instant answer is what I asked for and I appreciate your answer very much.
-c__wang(溪);
2012-1-29(#7245267@0)
You are absolutely right. I am sure you are an excellent father. Child abuse was not unusual in my childhood and I am sorry I can’t tell you if the story is true or not. :)
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-1-30(#7246292@0)
“…afternoon sunlight slanting through window enveloping her in a bright aura and warm breeze gently caressing her forehead hair.” - The most gentle and beautiful memories from the young and innocent time…
-slowdownforrose(放慢脚步);
2012-1-29(#7244878@0)
You probably won’t believe it - I had a hunch that you were going to like this part. And I am right!
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-1-30(#7246291@0)
不错。
-rollor(Rollor 印刷店);
2012-1-29(#7245282@0)
Thank you all for your comments.I didn’t expect it took me more than three hours to write this story and I skipped proofreading which I shouldn’t have. One thing leads to another, I slept through the whole Sunday morning and now I am behind on everything and a total wreck.
I will see you all on next Sunday.
-eric_2003(Wine Expert);
2012-1-30{281}(#7246293@0)
I like your English. It is so good..........but please don't take away your sleeping time for writing this story. Health is most important.
-fly_universe(飞越时空);
2012-1-30(#7246309@0)
clapping my handsi'd rather see you writing at 4pm though. health, Eric!
-hsl(胡司令);
2012-1-30{56}(#7246306@0)
What a beautiful story! The girl who drowned makes me cry.Your story reminds me one of my classmate who was a boy. He was always beat by his father while he was tied on a cross after the "Judgemental Day". Fortunately, he didn't die... I also learned lots of new vocabulary and usages. Thank you for sharing, and look forward for chapter 3.
-paulin007(时光如梭);
2012-1-30{286}(#7246338@0)
a very nice read. thank you eric.
-uptowngirl(若初 忘言);
2012-1-30(#7246374@0)
Beautiful ... our 70's experience particularly ... there's something buried in our memories like treasure ... very pleased reading the thing written in English in this beautiful way ...
-kenchow27(凯包子);
2012-1-30(#7247087@0)