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Algonquin------阿岗昆

passer(匆匆过客)

Algonquin

阿岗昆

瑶台宝镜落尘寰，碎作万点碧瀛然。

秋水莹莹千潭月，浮云霭霭一长天。

野树参差藏幽径，澄波潋滟荡秋船。

山苍水绿人无倦，醉卧松荫任流连。

Algonquin

Jewellery mirror in Heaven fell down on the Earth,

broke into thousand verdant glittering pieces .

Moon in sky varies thousand reflections shining in all lakes,

while rows of clouds are drifting in boundless space.

Wild trees grow lushly but narrow paths hide insides.

Canoes float in lakes as crystal water gently ripples.

Guests from all enjoy the clean water and blue mountains,

Under the pines,they entirely revel in so graceful views.

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Last Updated: 2011-12-5

wow, 能否扫扫盲，说一下英文诗的韵是怎么押的？网上总看到高人写诗，我一直搞不清楚。 -slowdownforrose(放慢脚步); 2011-12-5 (#7123007@0)

英文部分没读出诗的味道。很多句子的最后一词都是s结尾，难道押的是s? LOL. -winterstorm(打酱油的); 2011-12-5 (#7123149@0)

pog lake--------波多湖 -passer(匆匆过客); 2011-12-6 {1551} (#7123172@0)
波多湖

山小如枕台，水柔可盈怀。

千松一色秀，青峦两边排。

日落莲花静，月隐星河开。

塘蛙声几许？传入帐中来。

Pog Lake

Small hills are so cute just as my pillow.

Crystal water is so pure it cleans my soul.

Thousands pines sway there in one style show.

Blue hills stand quietly in both sides row.

In sunset shining,blooming lotuses are quietly pure.

Moon hides away while bright stars still glow.

How long have frogs been singing as rivers flow?

It gets into my dream whatever it's high or low.
very good. reminding me of my own old limericks打油诗。。。 -hsl(胡司令); 2011-12-7 (#7127831@0)

好诗！第二句提到月亮，描写白日似乎美中不足，试改一下：青松倒影湖面静，水底白云衬天蓝。 -zbeifly(不是爱风尘似被前缘误); 2011-12-7 (#7127850@0)

I always think writers and poets contribute far more to the human kind as a whole than what they take from. This is a group I admire most. -eric_2003(Wine Expert); 2011-12-9 {590} (#7131442@0)
My only experience on poems, when I was still in junior high, was on free-style. At that time, it seemed everyone could write poems. I tried several of my own. I thought I wrote verses and broke them up by sentences and realigned them vertically. Of course, when I look back now, it was a joke. But I did learn something though - it takes a beautiful mind to write real poems. You need to see beyond life to appreciate beautiful things and see what other people fail to see.

Allow me keep your poems. Next time I visit Algonquin, I think I will take in the scenery through your eyes.

True. When something goes wrong in society, people are much more likely to believe what writers and poets say than what politicians say. -hhyang(哈哈羊); 2011-12-9 (#7131579@0)